tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post912535309327134060..comments2023-05-07T04:41:42.963-05:00Comments on A Writer's Life: Wewriwa 06/09/2013 "Ya'll just make your head explode."Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08658537341947548605noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-3466166959780659542013-06-13T11:02:00.545-05:002013-06-13T11:02:00.545-05:00I think you've captured the dialogue really we...I think you've captured the dialogue really well. This has been my first week on wewriwa so I've not been able to read your previous scenes and felt a bit in the dark about what was going on, but your characters have definite voices that make them feel unique to someone stepping in in the middle of the story. :)Djedrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03775016260264467119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-41552809072207594912013-06-11T13:55:08.336-05:002013-06-11T13:55:08.336-05:00Loved your snippet - especially the opening line! ...Loved your snippet - especially the opening line! Nicely done.Susan Stuckeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14742093200745409339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-58373117396014891212013-06-10T16:56:46.183-05:002013-06-10T16:56:46.183-05:00lol Loved the snippet!lol Loved the snippet!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-71466605909469863012013-06-09T19:32:19.575-05:002013-06-09T19:32:19.575-05:00Good 8. I do think you made him stand out in his d...Good 8. I do think you made him stand out in his dialogue. I was trying to say it in my head like you put it on the page.<br />New follower<br />~Summer<br /><a href="http://summersvoice.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">My Blog</a> Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-62404380118638160642013-06-09T15:54:18.820-05:002013-06-09T15:54:18.820-05:00Guys really don't always get it. nice 8.Guys really don't always get it. nice 8.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-18402875590495138612013-06-09T14:39:22.877-05:002013-06-09T14:39:22.877-05:00Ha! Yep, heads explode on the regular! Very nice :...Ha! Yep, heads explode on the regular! Very nice :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558148880299237481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-70224931666158438452013-06-09T11:30:45.027-05:002013-06-09T11:30:45.027-05:00Good advice for all men; never try to understand u...Good advice for all men; never try to understand us. Your heads will definitely explode! ☺ I thought the accent sounded good, but don't know the finer points of American dialects.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-58654972624413459002013-06-09T10:24:42.726-05:002013-06-09T10:24:42.726-05:00I know it can be tricky to capture an accent or di...I know it can be tricky to capture an accent or dialogue accurately while not being overwhelming. You'll probably hit upon the perfect way to write it over the course of writing and editing.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-72167155084506599452013-06-09T05:56:43.733-05:002013-06-09T05:56:43.733-05:00It's better if it's a gender thing than if...It's better if it's a gender thing than if it's an age thing because at least he won't start thinking that he could avoid it. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.com