tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post8620421431867713682..comments2023-05-07T04:41:42.963-05:00Comments on A Writer's Life: Wewriwa 06-23-2013 - Not mine, anymoreAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08658537341947548605noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-40792612346561961652013-06-29T11:45:11.108-05:002013-06-29T11:45:11.108-05:00Thank you. Yeah, it was a pretty intense scene, gl...Thank you. Yeah, it was a pretty intense scene, glad that came through properly.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-8712534974941031822013-06-29T11:33:26.631-05:002013-06-29T11:33:26.631-05:00Thank you, glad you liked it.
Hmm... Actually, I ...Thank you, glad you liked it.<br /><br />Hmm... Actually, I think that last week may have been the first time one of the snippets made any mention to her being an empath. But actually, exactly how and why he can block her has not really been addressed yet. The conversation when she finally asks him about that is going to be quite interesting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-67763808897801745072013-06-29T11:27:19.545-05:002013-06-29T11:27:19.545-05:00LOL Yeah, if she wasn't so worried about him, ...LOL Yeah, if she wasn't so worried about him, she'd probably try to strangle him for that bit.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-71324566830413535562013-06-29T11:24:52.764-05:002013-06-29T11:24:52.764-05:00Oh yes, even more tortured than this is showing. N...Oh yes, even more tortured than this is showing. Next week will be him reacting to all of this - it's not pretty.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-10091498792961485012013-06-29T11:13:40.658-05:002013-06-29T11:13:40.658-05:00Yeah, they're both a bit of a mess, right now....Yeah, they're both a bit of a mess, right now. Thank you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-34553302187613004822013-06-29T11:10:10.379-05:002013-06-29T11:10:10.379-05:00They were at a concert memorial - something one of...They were at a concert memorial - something one of Eli's friends put together to honour the resent dead of the city - with a special tribute to the most recent of them... Esther. I think Eli is actually feeling guilty.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-48281123639172537672013-06-29T11:08:05.091-05:002013-06-29T11:08:05.091-05:00Yeah, I don't think he was really ready for th...Yeah, I don't think he was really ready for this. I feel bad for both of them, though - he hates knowing that he's hurting her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17483358896129416234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-17549214835483644012013-06-27T11:53:20.223-05:002013-06-27T11:53:20.223-05:00You've captured a great deal of intensity in t...You've captured a great deal of intensity in this short scene. Plenty to develop from here:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-84028902976783091842013-06-25T09:47:08.497-05:002013-06-25T09:47:08.497-05:00That's a really lovely snippet. The voice is p...That's a really lovely snippet. The voice is poetic with a wonderful rhythm. I love the repetition of not wanting to be alone.<br /><br />Your snippet works great as a standalone, but I'm a newbie on wewriwa, so I was worried when I read your intro paragraph. I haven't read all of the story before and I don't know anything about the characters, but it seemed to assume I would know how he is blocking her from sensing his emotions. She can sense emotions?Djedrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03775016260264467119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-14163069947838538092013-06-23T16:15:30.747-05:002013-06-23T16:15:30.747-05:00Don't you hate it when people decide they know...Don't you hate it when people decide they know what's best for you? Great snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-77852630580149668442013-06-23T11:28:22.460-05:002013-06-23T11:28:22.460-05:00Very emotional. A love a tortured hero and Eli mus...Very emotional. A love a tortured hero and Eli must be one. As far as your first sentence goes, I would put a period where you have the comma, after later. That next sentence holds more of a punch if it stands alone.Shannyn Schroederhttp://www.shannynschroeder.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-39265480868784085092013-06-23T09:47:07.356-05:002013-06-23T09:47:07.356-05:00Wow, emotional to the nth degree. I feel sorry for...Wow, emotional to the nth degree. I feel sorry for both of them - excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-40627435067605617852013-06-23T08:38:55.539-05:002013-06-23T08:38:55.539-05:00I'm wondering why the change, what's happe...I'm wondering why the change, what's happened for him, but I feel for her. Excellent emotion in this! PS: I hate blogger sometimes. Those extra lines are annoying, aren't they? lol Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-80530858575317401762013-06-23T07:01:16.742-05:002013-06-23T07:01:16.742-05:00Eli has some issues to deal with before being suit...Eli has some issues to deal with before being suitable for a girlfriend. Poor Catie though that's a hard blow. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.com