tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post8202501777394278630..comments2023-05-07T04:41:42.963-05:00Comments on A Writer's Life: Wewriwa 06-30-2013 And debt repaidAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08658537341947548605noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-84653679463493625432013-07-04T21:37:13.452-05:002013-07-04T21:37:13.452-05:00Eli seems full of contradiction. He'd better f...Eli seems full of contradiction. He'd better fix himself before breaking Catie's heart. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-41219733025332794322013-07-01T22:22:04.610-05:002013-07-01T22:22:04.610-05:00Interesting snippet.Interesting snippet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06335174308646893781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-67641793004096185642013-06-30T15:36:53.234-05:002013-06-30T15:36:53.234-05:00This is my 1st time on your blog, and I'm sorr...This is my 1st time on your blog, and I'm sorry I missed seeing the action through Catie's eyes... it sounds like they've got some serious gifts between them... almost like the incredible gifts needs to be balanced out by an equal amount of tension and tragedy. Eli's voice sounds like he's losing hope but he still cares... great tension and I learned a lot about using a character's thoughts (I'm a total newbie) to carry the story line. Thanks for a great snippet!Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/moonlight-escape/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-79147957769678553572013-06-30T13:23:34.798-05:002013-06-30T13:23:34.798-05:00'Watching the sunrise' is not the answer! ...'Watching the sunrise' is not the answer! They've certainly got some stuff to work through. Nice snippet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-82879216296430656632013-06-30T12:17:56.521-05:002013-06-30T12:17:56.521-05:00Newbie here...don't know the past of this stor...Newbie here...don't know the past of this story, but from this snippet, I'm curious about her powers, and what caused the anguished scream. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-1207784335006561412013-06-30T10:03:37.262-05:002013-06-30T10:03:37.262-05:00I can get a sense of his feelings for her - a lot ...I can get a sense of his feelings for her - a lot of mixed feelings which feels like being on a rollercoaster. Nicely done!Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-82624214430093203382013-06-30T09:41:19.884-05:002013-06-30T09:41:19.884-05:00Love how raw his feelings are in this snippet and ...Love how raw his feelings are in this snippet and with his simple actions, wow, well done.<br />Love this song too.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-82221654841271967352013-06-30T08:29:36.239-05:002013-06-30T08:29:36.239-05:00Wow, some intense stuff in their past, waiting to ...Wow, some intense stuff in their past, waiting to be revealed! I thought the snippet portrayed the depth of his emotions very nicely. Great 8!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.com