tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post7205512470296718138..comments2023-05-07T04:41:42.963-05:00Comments on A Writer's Life: Weekend Writing Warriors 02/17/2013Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08658537341947548605noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-58485585912048628972013-02-18T11:08:53.716-06:002013-02-18T11:08:53.716-06:00Yeah, he's a goner, all right. Thank you. Thin...Yeah, he's a goner, all right. Thank you. Things certainly are going to get interesting for them... LOLJennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-40086532247970025432013-02-18T11:05:39.701-06:002013-02-18T11:05:39.701-06:00Thank you.Thank you.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-68563120147009560262013-02-18T11:00:21.018-06:002013-02-18T11:00:21.018-06:00Aww... And things are going to get worse, still.Aww... And things are going to get worse, still.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-51271028761261029262013-02-18T10:57:06.931-06:002013-02-18T10:57:06.931-06:00Thank you. And yes, they're vampires.Thank you. And yes, they're vampires.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-39312407084867536832013-02-18T10:54:34.698-06:002013-02-18T10:54:34.698-06:00Thank you.Thank you.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-52055738257345911152013-02-18T10:50:27.965-06:002013-02-18T10:50:27.965-06:00Thank you.Thank you.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-74890919629996469522013-02-18T10:48:32.531-06:002013-02-18T10:48:32.531-06:00Hehehe Yes, he's got problems, all right. Than...Hehehe Yes, he's got problems, all right. Thank you.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-90589021543766151492013-02-18T10:40:30.625-06:002013-02-18T10:40:30.625-06:00Yeah, he's a goner, that's clear! Fun and ...Yeah, he's a goner, that's clear! Fun and emotional at the same time. Now of course we have to know how he handles this conflict :)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-43714361109327326792013-02-18T10:35:10.034-06:002013-02-18T10:35:10.034-06:00No, it's clear from the start. The very first ...No, it's clear from the start. The very first scene includes Catie eating.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-80438548666293755602013-02-17T22:15:09.210-06:002013-02-17T22:15:09.210-06:00You chose well, this is a great snippet to show hi...You chose well, this is a great snippet to show his conflicted feelings. Am SO curious...great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17961489299769954315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-87456015398670723822013-02-17T14:30:00.306-06:002013-02-17T14:30:00.306-06:00Oh! I just want to give him a hug! Poor Eli.Oh! I just want to give him a hug! Poor Eli.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-33484534246767086842013-02-17T14:16:01.396-06:002013-02-17T14:16:01.396-06:00Welcome! nicely done - and is the vampire assumpti...Welcome! nicely done - and is the vampire assumption correct?suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-14041079898244402552013-02-17T11:37:31.979-06:002013-02-17T11:37:31.979-06:00Oh my goodness! That last line is wonderful.Oh my goodness! That last line is wonderful.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-77814392164831261732013-02-17T11:04:58.798-06:002013-02-17T11:04:58.798-06:00Wow, terrific last line!Wow, terrific last line!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-43189152251861351372013-02-17T10:20:59.737-06:002013-02-17T10:20:59.737-06:00Oh dear, he's got problems! Once he starts thi...Oh dear, he's got problems! Once he starts thinking of her in that way, he isn't going to be able to stop. I'm fascinated by the fact he's a vampire, didn't see that coming - going to be very interesting to read more!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-87802537234179067672013-02-17T10:12:04.140-06:002013-02-17T10:12:04.140-06:00I was intrigued by the last sentence. All makes se...I was intrigued by the last sentence. All makes sense now. Great extract!Catherine Cavendishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17449903323633317080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-68272981953684798172013-02-17T10:11:58.075-06:002013-02-17T10:11:58.075-06:00Oh this looks interesting. I didn't even guess...Oh this looks interesting. I didn't even guess the vampire part. Do you hold of letting the reader know that or do we know from the start?HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-89158369794891395332013-02-17T10:03:36.902-06:002013-02-17T10:03:36.902-06:00Thank you! Yeah, I'm not giving anything away ...Thank you! Yeah, I'm not giving anything away by saying that they're vampires. Eli's heart stopped beating over 200 years ago. LOL That line actually came from me going "what the heck would be the vampire equivalent to someone's heart skipping a beat? Having it START beating again, of course."Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03806098403827333505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2974767979053059266.post-62310031081702694602013-02-17T07:51:28.377-06:002013-02-17T07:51:28.377-06:00Awe, I like it! What a sweet scene. I love it whe...Awe, I like it! What a sweet scene. I love it when a male protagonist is so candid. Good last sentence. It makes me wonder what happened to the guy that he felt as though his heart quit beating. Or, (per the genre) is his heart really not beating?? :-) <br /><br />Nice snippet!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com